Part two of MVO has been added. I have simply attached this to the bottom of the previous post as I don’t really want to split these parts into separate chapters. If you have already read part 1, just do a page search for the * and jump to where part 2 starts.
Part 3 is coming along but my computer has decided to pack it in, final straw was when I lost an hour’s work on MVO when it crashed yet again. So it is off to the shop for that and a short hiatus for my writing.
Thanks so much for all the feedback. I appreciate it more than I can put into words.